This page had three panels originally, one in the middle, of Noah slamming the door after Kyisha leaves the room, but as I was drawing it I decided it wasn’t necessary and got rid of it. I like the big black space between the two panels, like the yawning gulf growing between the two characters!!! >:D
I’ve always liked using large spaces between panels as a way to mess with the pacing, adding a “beat” between certain moments or drawing a moment out to make it feel longer, heavier, or more pensive.
Now it’s time to get started on COLORING for chapter 1!
Love the black space.
I think the "black space" works well for this page, you can always change it if you prefer the other idea.