It’s coming along!! I ended up not being all that crazy about how small I made the guards on the left and I was trying to see if I could make them bigger while still keeping the neat swoop lines of the motorcycle but I couldn’t really make it work so ARGH I’ll just leave it like it is. >:O
Normally a page doesn’t take me this long, it’s really getting ridiculous.
don't get too down on yourself, it's looking cool as fuck! also, i see what you did with the legs there! it does look better.
aah, the babies peaking out of the bag!
I think it looks fine as is. The bike, Max and Kyisha are the focal point. I really like Kyisha’s pose in the 2nd panel.